写了一篇作文,但是没有老师帮我改,麻烦高手帮我改改,谢谢.

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  • ,feel more and more our life styles is gradually changed.___ can feel the big changes of our life-styles

    It becomes faster and more efficient to go shopping ,as well as the communicate with friends.The education is no longer confined in the classroom but expands to the Internet.

    As we all know,long-distance education has considerable advantages. the following three maybe the more important. firstly,it narrows the distance between the professor and the student.The professor is giving his lecture in a city,and the students around the country can listen to him at that time. How amazing it is ! The second one is that it enable everyone who need and suit to receive the education has the equivalent chance to enhance himself without passing some examinations.The last but not least , saving money and time is its characteristics.

    On long-distance education ,however, is not suitable for every person.If one prefer reading to gain knowledge,he'd better go to the library.If one want to study in a co-operation surrounding ,he'd better go to the school.

    In a word,the attitude to this way of learning vary from different people.(你的这个结论和前面的偶不搭啊,最好改成与 the long-term education有关的)