小弟初学英语特别是作文不太好 请各位大虾帮我改改作文以后小弟一个礼拜这时候写一篇,主要帮我改改语法3Q

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  • Today is my birthday and also it is the day in honour of LeiFeng who is one of the most friendly man in the world , so I made my decision to follow his example on this special day

    At first I made breakfast for my parents. They are satisfied with my cooking skills .Centanily, the breakfast is very delicious. Secondly, I repaired the desks and chairs which are in my classroom. It is so hard to me and I tried repairing them over and over again. Finally I succeeded . Lastly I went to the home for the aged and spent my birthday with the elderly.

    This is the most educational birthday I have ever had. I will never forget today!

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