急求这2篇英语作文的修改,越快越好!中考水平以上

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  • 第一篇文章:春节计划:This is my festival plan.the first day,we will celebrate with my family together. We will enjoy the delicious food and watch the TV. I also can play the firecracker with my cousins. We believe that it may get rid of bad things.For the children,they like money,because it is lucky money. We will bow to the older people and wish them happy in the New Year.This is our Chinese spring festival.

    第二篇文章:怎样学才是效果最好的.Our class had a parents’ meeting at the last week.At the meeting time,the parents talked about too much homework is good or not. Many parents thought that doing too much homework was useful. In my opinion,I don’t think do the too much homework is useful to a student,sometimes we need have a rest,not just do the homework.If have too much homework,we couldn’t finish it. Some students will be afraid of do the homework,even never do it again. That’s so terrible.We need time do our own things,just like read books,do some sports and so on.But if not homework,I think that it’s also no good.Because we nothing to do it.So I think do the teacher should teach us how to study,how to review,not just for the exam.