上面写的和下面改的都是chinglish,我看半天都看不懂.哎,也罢,想必中学老师也只能看懂这个.
英文就要这么写：
Thank you for your whole year's hard work, our dearest teacher. We, the bunch of stundents of 9th class, really appreciate it. And we will all try our best to make your hard work and expectation have some worthiness.
Have a happy Teacher's Day!