说实话你的简历问题不少.一是语法和用词,是内容.
I'll start with the content 'cause it's probably easier to deal with.
1.You have the categories experience,job description,performance,reason for resignation and university experience,it's a bit redundant.
Try something like
EXPERIENCE
Safety inspector
- etc etc etc insert your content here.you don't need to separate job description and performance,they should be under the same title,and you don't need to provide a reason for your resignation.If you want to mention it,you can do so in the cover letter,but it's not critical.
University experience
- You mentioned a five month practical,(yes,it's practical,not practice),you may want to mention what you did and how you did.You worked there for 4yrs,may as well talk about it.
2.Do not give a self evaluation.If you want to provide a list of skill sets and traits that make you suitable for the job,fine,but that's usually in the beginning of the resume.And titled something like 'Skill Sets" or "Qualifications",these are usually a summary of your key skills and traits.The title self-evaluation makes you sound pompous.
3.How long ago did you graduate from university?usually your resume include an education category,even if it is only a couple of lines.
4.It is customary to write job title first and date later.
e.g.safety inspector 2006-present.
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I don't want to fix the grammar & diction problems because you have a lot of editing to do,& even if I do correct your mistakes now,it wouldn't help because you'll have to change most of them anyways.
PS.The courses above with good performance is not right,I don't think,at least I can't understand it.