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Last summer vacation,I watched a film named "Homeles to Harvad".This movie is about Liz Murray's life.This is a touching inspirational video.This movie is takling about a girl whose name is Liz Murray and she was born in a slum which is in The United States.Her family is very terrible.When she was 8years old,she decided to wander the sity with her friends.They slept in the subway station,stealing food from a supermarket.One day,her freidns couldn't stand this life anymore.So,they left alone .
When she frew up,Liz knew that she could only change her life by achieving education success.She began to study;she used 2years to finish a four-year-courses in Senior High School.
This story gave me power,even though it might seen like crazy.I did things that i didn't do /hadn't done before.After watching the film,I knew that nothing in impossible.It is just depending on how much you pay or do.
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