a deep feeling ?kiss at/in my childhood,my grandparents never achieved any my gift.next years/year i will give them a deep feeling kiss as my best gift at double ninth festival?. at /in mychildhood my grandparents were very fond of me,i remember/remembered my grandma embrace /embracing me in the morning .and my grandfather used a number of money to buy snack for me and it contains the love for me. When i grown up,my grandparents were gradually strict me with study and wish me study very well.although,when my parents wanted to hit me,my grandparents always comfort me. now my grandparents are getting older;i have nothing to show my love except a deep feeling kiss.i hope they can know i love them when they rechieve the gift.finally,i wish my grandparents are happy and wish them cheerful at double ninth festival?.
改了一点错的太多啦,首字母大写,还有逗号注意位子,生词最好不要用,句型完全混乱,没法改啦!有些说法我见都没见过