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  • If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

    If I get a chance to change one important thing about my lovely hometown, the most important thing I want to do is to change the environment condition there .for one reason , living condition is very vital for the people all over the town. A perfect environment condition certainly will bring about numerous benefits that make our life happier, healthier and more efficiency.

    The first thing I will state is that we must realize some of us really do a large number of bad things to the environment instead of protecting it from being slowly destroyed. The truth is that we get disease by our own hands, but its not strange because we always breathe the contaminated air, we drink the polluted water. Nevertheless the more we desire to cover the dirty truth, the more things we will lose. In a word, we have to face it.

    Secondly, please all of us try to develop the imagination what would be brought to us if we pay much attention to the serious problem. Obviously , a lot of things including the material and economic things will come for us. If the environment is much better than before, we will probably live in harmony and healthy surroundings,and get stronger.

    With the environment getting better, my hometown will also gain the traction of outer people who want to travel in the healthy towns. Everybody likes clear rivers, green plants and blue sky

    The third thing I will say is also important. We can handle big deals with merchants for the economic development by the advantages of great environmental conditions. Through these methods to change the situation, I do trust the belief that my hometown will have a better future and attract more people will come true.