高中英语短文改错----高手帮忙

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  • The first time I decide to leave home was that when I was upon graduation in high school.I

    was having trouble and getting along with my parents.I had gotten about fifty dollars from their pockets,

    so I thought about leaving home.It spent me only two weeks leave home while I started

    to feel homesick.Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:

    being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because I’m on my own,I get to

    deal with my duties without told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to

    give me their advices.In the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules

    for me to follow.

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