1..It's my honor to speak here, and give you a speech. Then today I'd like to talk something about my summer holiday.改为It's my great honor to stand here and give you a speech.Today i'd like to share something about my summer holiday.
2. 第二段改为i'm a lucky guy, i think, i had been absent from school since April, so i had a longer summer vacation than other guys.During the long holiday, the most meaningful thing i did was that i had a joyful journey which was my first journey with my family.
3. We traveled Beijing which had a long history and rich culture. The journey lasted a week. IWe visited the Great wall, the Forbidden city, the Summer Palace, the Imperial College and other places of historic interest scenic beauty like other visitors did. I was impressed on so many beautiful scenery. Besides this, i also enjoyed famous speciality of Beijing food. We had a wonderful dinner in Quanjude whose Beijing roast duck was known far and wide. Also, Candied Haws on a stick, which attracted me most was also one kind of distinctive food.
4.After this journey, I not only gained knowledge about the old history but also learned many truth. For example, when climbing the Great Wall, I learned we should insist on when we faced difficulties. Only in this way can we succeed. In addition to this, it’s our responsibility to protect the historical heritage.
This journey not only enrichs my holiday but also broadens my horizon.
Finally,thanks for your attention. That’s all.