To whom it may concern,
it is my honor to introduce myself to you. My name is and I am 24 years old. I am from province,. I was graduated from economy, a adminstration department of university, and I am majored in Industry and commerical management.
During the period of undergraduated studying ,I am a hardworking student.I passed CET4 and National Computer Rank Examination.I got my bachelor degree in 2008. During the days of studying and living in campus, this experience changed my perspective towards life. This four years of studying made me indepedent ,optimistics and sociable , which is an advantage and benefit for myself.
When I was young,my parents told to me that teacher is one of the most respectful and honorable career I shall choose. From that time on ,I always have a dream to be a teacher. After graduation,I got an opportunity to be a teacher in the secondary school. However, my postion as a secondary school teacher did not satisfy myself because I want to teach in university. Consequently,I took the postgraduate examination in 2009. Unfortunely, I lost that time, but i did not give up. I am still working on it to overcome it because I believe if I toil, I will succeed.
Finally,all of my efforts got a nice result.It is such a great honor for me to have the opprtunity for this interview. I do hope that I can finish my postgraduate in university which I have desired for a long time.I intend to pursue my master degree in department, which is most competitive in this university ,not to mention that there are many famous professors in this department. To be exact,I really want to study under your supervision.
The reason for my application this major is quite simple. I learned relevant curriculum at undergraduate school such as ,I have great interest in this descipline. That is why I choose it as my major.
hi,
the overall information is good, but you need work on your grammar. i only changed the grammar of this composition. if you want this to be perfect, you should add more of your own opinions towards life and why you want to go into that school. i'm not you so i dont know what to write.
good luck!