Dear Tom,
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city. Recently I happened to find one that might be suitable for you.
The apartment building is located in Seasonal Garden with a park to the north. It is to the northwest of Huanan Sauare and is near to the main road Zhonghua Road. More than 20 bus lines are near at hand. So it is very convenient for you to go to the other parts of the city. Besides, a hospital, a supermarket, a high school, banks and even a material market are within easy reach. The buildings in this area are of specific style and newly designed. In the community there is a swimming pool and a gym, where you and your family can enjoy yourselves in your spare time.
Are you satisfied with it? If so, I will arrange it for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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